Sunday, September 11, 2005

Empty Spaces Comments

Rating: 4.0

there are many things in life
that can make the heart
be more
of a whole
...
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Stephanie van Oudtshoorn
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Mathew Lewis 30 May 2006

I really like this poem. It sits with you and gets under your skin. And I really like the lack of capitalisation as well. Just like empty spaces with the words. Or maybe I'm just bein too analytical. Nice poem though.: 0)

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Cj Heck 19 October 2005

This is so heartfelt and beautiful, Stephanie. Ahhh, love... the most beautiful of emotions and the most heartbreaking. Warmest regards, CJ

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allan james saywell 12 September 2005

i have made a comment in the forum for you to look at, dont be late you got eight poetry blob

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Mary Nagy 12 September 2005

Hate to say the ol' 'Time heals all wounds' cliche but truly it does help the heart heal as well. Nice poem. sincerely, Mary

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Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

East London, South Africa
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