Monday, August 24, 2009

Empty Space In My Heart Comments

Rating: 0.0

In my heart there is an empty space
One that makes me wonder and pace
Wondering how i could lose so much
When all thats missing is your touch
...
Read full text

randy peralta
COMMENTS
Varanasi Ramabrahmam 24 August 2009

Nice depiction of loss and the void that loss has created. Very involved narration and expression. But the thoughts thus arising do not leave any emptiness. Your one is with you.

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success