Empty Space Comments

Nothingness magnified. Well penned dear poetess. Top score.

Magic happens reading this wonderful poem once more. Like a cloud without rain, loved emotion does magic. In the elements of nature's last take, tranquil lake speaks more. This poem is excellent poem.

Like water in a timeless, tranquil lake we feel light of mercy of God eternally. Then sunshine makes our dreams double. Song of heart we hear. Coming from the mystery of the skies above light of hope does magic. A brilliant and interesting poem is very well penned and shared.10

You have turned a daunting subject into a thing of beauty Hazel. You have created a deep love poem with strong words and powerful lines. Definitely one of your best.......Kudos 👏

The rhythms you create here are wonderful and the metre, if read out loud and properly, flow like silk or a waterfall you have such a lyrical style 10/10 BB : O)

Like a cloud without rain, Like the sun without light, Like day without night, Like a mountain without any height, Like a magician with a vanishing dove,

I think, Hazel, it's your best poem I have ever read. Only if you could maintain its meters properly like its rhymes, it would be a master piece. Immortal these lines: We are afraid of the lonliness of growing old, Leaving our loved one behind, Like a cloud without rain, Like the sun without light, Like day without night, Like a mountain without any height, Like a magician with a vanishing dove, That never returns,

This is a very beautiful poem, it makes one sad just by reading this, all that's left will be an empty space, that will be filled with love the past will always bring sweet memories to our dearest one's.

just a perfect notion, nothing more than splendid, love the whole poem and it is a memorable write indeed

Wow...Fantastic write..Loved reading it twice..

Like a mountain without height.Great words Thank you

Yes, magic happens when two hearts are in love! Leaving the loved one behind is the greatest agony, true lovers can ever feel! You have depicted love with two hearts beating as one in all its beauty and agony! !

Awesome, very original.

Awesome, very original.

a good write about empty space, the in between times which we all have a lot of. nicely written with good imagery.