Empty Space Comments

A girl who is lured by the galaxies, but sucked by the black hole! Love can be sometimes so damaging! But we realize it only late! This is a remarkably poignant write.... Sanjukta! The analogies used are just splendid! A 10

Soaked with silent tears! But, there is always hope in life. With the pace of the ace of life. Nice piece.

Love sometimes gives us that empty feeling. Harsh words are like poisoned arrows that wound one deeply. Thanks for sharing

It is a pity that a lover who holds an entire universe in his arms ends up in such a wretched state: 'Explore more of your invincible galaxies /...When your heavy words make my pillow / Soaked with silent tears.' Incredible and lovely. Thanks.

A lovely poem for lovers and sad yet can be so true Thanks-10++

Another upbeat poem on lovers' dilemma.........You took me for a ride to galaxy of love filled with love and pain....Amusing SN,100 on 10.

Very wonderful sharing done. Love radiates but we need to feel through such interesting sharing...10

Well penned poetic work. Wonderfully presented.