Friday, November 8, 2013

Empty Space Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rosy lips and orange cheeks
Searched for an empty space
Though it is a myth
And longed for the truth.
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Charles Jagongo Ogola 10 November 2013

Good choice of words. Excellently written.

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Neela Nath Das 08 November 2013

The inner thought so subtly written! Really, I liked the thought and thought as well.

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Poetheart Morgan 08 November 2013

Oh Yeah! ! ! A ten+ten, and hot and spice is not Poet? Very good but i am wondering where is the six for nine? ? ? ? Smiling! ! ! !

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