Sunday, April 9, 2017

Empty Souls Comments

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Empty souls
With so much dryness
They try to fill their cup
With water from others wells
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Edward Kofi Louis 04 June 2017

Much dryness! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 April 2017

But their souls remain Empty spaces Bitterness in their hearts Venom filled tongues Evil and wickedness remain in them. You are writing about a great reality. Fill the heart with love and u will prosper in life and peace will rule you soul

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Jazib Kamalvi 11 April 2017

A good poem in the line of t.S. Eliot. Thanks

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Rajnish Manga 09 April 2017

Perfect portrayal of the purveyors of all kinds of black forces who are out to destroy the eternal beauty and values of human relationships. Thanks for sharing. **** They stumble and fall / In their own wickedness

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