Empty Rooms Comments

Evidence of a gifted poet

this is great stuff I'd comment on them all but I think one will do really like your style, I've always had trouble bringing in structure to my work but you do it so nicely and it fits well I've read a lot of different writings and a lot of people stress the rhythem and the rhyme schemes that the poem loses its heart. Your stuff has a heart and all the other organs. Great stuff man, really like the elemental aspects too

hem... very touching. if i can, i'll write a parody. konstantin

This is a really fantastic piece, well penned and crafted, well done 10/10 Regards Tom

...................................................................................... I can't move, let alone speak. 10/10

Marvelous poem,10+....

That's an amazing and very beautiful poem! Great job!

amazing....beautiful......leaving me speechless.....a ver good poem....i luvd it...

you quite literally leave me speechless...that within itself is a miracle...amazing piece of work.

WOW. Very well done, my friend.