Empty Room Comments

You have written a fine poem. I know the emptyness one feels to lose the love of one[s life. Your poem expresses that hollowness that emptyness after death that cannot be filled and makes me think of these lines of Robert Desnos in his ' Poem for the Mysterious Woman' ....I have dreamt so much of you walked so much, talked, slept with your ghost that there only remains to me perhaps, for all that, to be ghost amongst the ghosts & shadow a hundred times more than the shadow which walks & will walk gaily on the sundial of your life....