Empty Presence Comments

Feelings conveyed in this poem are heartfelt, so pure. The bottle and the beau, both seemingly present, but actually: ' 'fleeting and leaving a trail as a token Of tears and red drops that are Hell-bent On reminding me that all that's left is false hope indefinite' A heartfelt perception. The title 'Empty Presence' is so full.....of void feelings!

Argentine, your words taste of bitterness, but fill my glass full- with richness and wanting... Emptiness is second rated... I consume your words... feast on their taste... And I am full. -Great Write! ; -) -Kelly.

This poem is really well written and I enjoyed the imagery and the emotion is really strong... Keep up the great work. -MP