Inside my pockets
the wind..
tries hard to play
an old game,
...
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I'm the melding of The Man With No Name (Clint Eastwood) with Johnny Cash - (The Man With No Cash) . But I'm not proud enough, as you aren't either, not to merely joke about it.
I really liked this one. Your contemplation and effective presentation makes reading a plesant experience. Keep going. Narayanan.
I like the imagery and the ambience of the poem.Empty pocket is a close relation of empty purse or, better still, one in an unholy wedlock.Do read read these my poems: 'Money' and 'Treasure'.Keep writing.
Sweet dreams not only empty your purse For them you sacrifice the whole universe. CP
With an empty purse only we can dream. we will get sound sleep and sweet dream. but with full purse we can not take even a nap. we can not shut our eye. beautiful write. thanks for sharing. keep sharing. regards.