Friday, June 17, 2005

Empty Outside Comments

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i set here looking out
the window not seeing
anything but some
trees, bushes, tables,
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joshua treece
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Lawrence S. Pertillar 17 June 2005

Hmmm. I like this poem because it reflects upon one's reality. To view 'outside' of oneself to contemplate if life exists is to be void of life 'within'? OR, do we see lifeless objects as possessing 'life' therefore once we observe the reality and purpose of inanimated objects do we feel less worthy WITH life? empty outside also implies there's some emptiness 'inside' as well!

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