Empty Nesters Comments
She knows that he loves her,
Yet she wants it more pronounced.
While she works at home in silence,
Wants him always to be around.
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Thank you, Sally Plumb Plumb, for your comment. Much inspired by your understanding.
Very expressive poem of a couple of 'empty nesters' and the wife's need to feel loved and appreciated.
a lovely poem of real attachments and the truth brought by you superb earth needs care to be beautified field and peasants relation alway for a good deal thank brother 10
Dear @Aftab Alam Khursheed, Thank you very much for your thoughtful comment on my poem, Rest in peace, dear friend!
Men and woman are different. The woman needs this telling over and over attention, many man do not understand this, which is the reason of unhappiness. I found in my time, the best is if both have some interest for the day and when they see each other at the end of the day, they can be happy, specially if they can discuss what they did. Or get a pet and they can play with that together
Nice thoughts, Lasoaphia Quxazs, thanks for sharing. Loved your idea of seeing each other at the end of the day and discussing how the day had gone by, and playing with a pet while doing so.
She holds the reins of his love, trust and respect as they bloom in their later years cherishing the time they spend together! Beauriful heart- warming write!
Your comment is also heart warming, @Hazel Durham. Thanks for your thoughtful appreciation.
Simply elegant. If not simple, then it is woven, like birds' nests, so beautifully, yet sturdily. The lady is lucky to have a man such as in your poem. Again, I can't help but rate it a ten!
You are not only a good poet in the making, but a good reader and a good analyzer as well. I am always inspired by reading your poems and reading your comments. It's a pleasure to listen to whatever you say, @Cassandra Jasmine. Thank you for the generous ten and the well worded comment.
@Musfiq Us Shaleheen Very kind words, very generous rating. Thank you.
very serene feel, season change over and going, lovely write poem by dear muse poet..10/10
this is the summer of life, come winter. lovely poem.
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7/26/2025 6:22:04 AM # 1.0.0
Reading this, I feel it is my story! ! ! Perhaps this is the story of every aging couple with the children away and the nest, almost empty! The sense of loneliness heightening the need for each other! ! Enjoyed much!
'The sense of loneliness heightening the need for each other! ' - That's right! That is the case. Thank you for your thoughtful comment, that brings out the gist of the poem, @Valsa George.