Monday, February 11, 2019

Empty Mind Comments

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Empty Mind

In this spare time of life,
Life has become a resting site,
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Prabir Gayen
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Jankovic Zoran 24 February 2019

Everyone has an empty mind, but those who know that they think they always fill their own so that it is never empty. When he does not work he has a need to rest and we can not always sleep. You type big word do not worry my friend.

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Rajnish Manga 12 February 2019

An 'Empty Mind' and the people who possess it have been essayed in an objective manner quite elaborately. I must thank you for change in the age-old narrative whereby it (Empty Mind) used to be a devil's workshop. Thanks for this highly analytical piece of poetry as well as for sharing the image of Sri Sri Ravi Shankar ji. In thoughtless leisure demise; recede to abysmal ruin. Within and without I Am a vast Nothing.

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Prabir Gayen 12 February 2019

Beautiful comment....thanks poet...The great

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 February 2019

thoughtful stanza- Future is nebulous and mystic too, Within the womb of time it does fuse, Time has become timeless having no vigor, Life has become a worshiper without Vesper.//// beautiful poem penned

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 February 2019

Space of light! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bharati Nayak 11 February 2019

Plodding on the pathless path, Without thought like a vast space of light, I am a sky Now with no heavenly bodies, Within and without I Am a vast Nothing. - - - - A deeply philosophical write, thanks for sharing.

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Prabir Gayen 12 February 2019

Thanks dear poetess.....

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Srijita Mondal 11 February 2019

When our little mind dies it becomes unlimited and Infinite like Space..🌷 My dear no-mind you are unbounded, as vast as Sky..my final abode..💙 You are always outside and inside me🌹

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Srijita Mondal 11 February 2019

Plodding on the pathless path, Without thought like a vast space of light, I am a sky Now with no heavenly bodies, Within and without I Am a vast Nothing

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 February 2019

The slow movement of mind, With the slow pace of time, Mind and time become nothing, Only a vague delight is falling. all is relative BUT TIME MOVES CONSTANTLY AN EMPTY MIND IS DEVILISH SO PG KEEP IT TOTALLY BUSY READ EVERY WORD OF MINE YOU WILL BECOME POSITIVE AND FINE AND A LOVER OF POETRY YES OF MINE IF YOU CHANGE UR SINGLE GARLAND SNAP ADD YOUR BETTER HELF'S ONLY THEY KEEP YOU CALF-ED

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 February 2019

A well penned poem, Prabir......10+++

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Prabir Gayen 11 February 2019

Thanks dear friend poet....... Happy to have your comment..

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Unwritten Soul 11 February 2019

Empty mind...but explosion thoughts are surrounded your words here. Poem was written with soft tone, strong idea and wonderful observation!

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Prabir Gayen 11 February 2019

Very grateful for your beautiful comment..dear poet...Unwritten Soul...thanks

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