Monday, July 14, 2008

Empty Mind Comments

Rating: 4.5

Mind is empty
It never touches the vision
Nor the smell
Not the taste
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Kolitha Lelwala
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Iboro Akpan 04 August 2022

Wonderful peom and inspiring.

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C. P. Sharma 10 July 2009

You are right, it canm never be filled, its capacity is infinite. CP

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ppp sss 31 December 2008

As I start this piece, I find the title means something diffrent to me by the time I reach the end. As if the poem does some sort of twist or dives to a diffrent layer.

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Greenwolfe 1962 19 July 2008

I gave this a 9 believe it or not because it was too short. I do not believe any poem should ever end in the word enigma. GW62

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