Monday, August 29, 2011

Empty Hope Comments

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you left me, i was all alone
i loved you while your heart was cold.
i tried to fix things, your anwser was clear
you wanted nothing to do with me, exactly what i feared.
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Amber AandB
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Bartholomew A. B. Sarbah 09 October 2011

Great poem, passionate and emotional! ! ! I can tell you really love the heartbreaker. U r a very good poet. Thank for making me read a good poem today.

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Stefanie Fontker 29 August 2011

Sounds tough, good luck. Great poem though, your emotions are expressed well in this one.

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