Empty Heart Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Empty Heart

Rating: 5.0


Winds and Moon
whispering
gossiping
eyeing
in the dim night
on the unkempt head of willows

owl and bat chastise me
from the dark heart of bamboo garden

drunkard I am singing
on the alone night road;
suddenly broken sound of the bottle......

the sun is laughing on me on the pyre
Oh! it's morning
I am on the burned corpse ashes!

I do not know-
who lives in the home of sun


05.08.2020 Chattogram

Friday, August 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life,loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 07 August 2020

broken sound of the bottle......fantastic write.....thanks....anjandev roy.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 August 2020

A poignant yet marvelous poem that wonderfully describes the state of loneliness. Sometimes a lonely heart forgot that the Sun always rises and gives its light to everyone. Beautifully crafted with compelling imagery.

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M Asim Nehal 10 August 2020

Loneliness is depressing for some and for others it an opportunity to speak to self and enjoy knowing self. Nature is the solace during this time and we as a poets enjoy every bit of it as you did while expressing in your wonderful poem. 10++

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 August 2020

Life of loneliness, an imaginative way to say what you want to say, Lovely dear MB. Please bear with me for my irregular visits to your poems.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 August 2020

Dim Night! ! ! ! In search of the light. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 August 2020

A beautiful poem with fathomless poetic beauty! Loved reading it....10/10

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