Wednesday, October 10, 2018

Empty Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Emptiness surrounds me
but my soul glides free
soaring through this wind
storms lay beneath me
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Aqua Flower
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Carl Roussell 11 October 2018

Remove the clouds from your heart and you will be free.

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Aqua Flower 11 October 2018

thank you....great suggestion

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 October 2018

This is a beautiful poem regarding emptiness having touching expression with nice penmanship. Thanks for sharing.10

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Kostas Lagos 10 October 2018

A beautiful poem Flower!

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Aqua Flower 10 October 2018

Thank you Kostas!

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Nosheen Irfan 10 October 2018

A sterling piece of writing. Thank u for sharing. Short and crisp. But effectively conveys the emptiness within.

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Aqua Flower 10 October 2018

Love your comment and thank you Norsheen.

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 October 2018

'I rather be without than always living in a life of doubt'... is beautiful. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Aqua Flower 10 October 2018

A life of doubt always keeps you guessing. Thank you for appreciating and quoting the essence of the poem.

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