Thursday, September 5, 2013

Empty Heart Comments

Rating: 4.2

Powdery, white grains of sand
Softly sifted through my hand.

Flinging sand out towards the sea
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Beach Girl
COMMENTS
Dr Antony Theodore 14 August 2019

Cross miles and miles of endless sea I thought I heard you call my name. You strode into my empty heart Of vacant halls and silent pain. very fine poem. indeed so romantic in its essence. tony

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Shahin Latif 29 November 2015

Truly romantic poem. Good ink! I enjoyed it. So, Thanks a lot dearest poet Beach Girl. Be well always.

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Bri Edwards 12 December 2014

sorry about the smiles. i'll come over tonight and clean those up. bri :) p.s. i would be looking in my inbox and at my poem comments, BUT could not access them. but i COULD access my favorite poets, and you are one of them.

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Chuy Amante 11 March 2014

As they say on the street: Amor de legos es amor de pendejos! Love is everywhere, open up and take some! ! ! ! keeping putting your heart on paper, you do it well! ! ! full of FEEL!

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V P Mahur 02 March 2014

dear Beach this one is a lovely song full of love feelings Thanks for a nice musical note I invite you to read my poems.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 January 2014

'You strode into my empty heart And found that it was vacant' - So cute!

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Suman Kumar Das 02 December 2013

My heart got brimmed with love after reading such spectacular song.............................. liked it.

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Sekharan Pookkat 25 September 2013

A lovely romantic poem- I like the following lines very much Cross miles and miles of endless sea I heard you call my name

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Abhishek Mishra 22 September 2013

a nice rhythmic poem..loved it: -)

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Patricia Grantham 19 September 2013

I really and truly enjoyed this romantic and soothing write. I hope that the dream of love will come true. Great expressions.

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Ken E Hall 19 September 2013

Without dreams we have nothing, the poem reaches out to fill an empty heart...luvli! regards and thank you I shall return.

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Unwritten Soul 18 September 2013

Nice and left me feel so much thing to say but just cat utterly said_Soul

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Khairul Ahsan 10 September 2013

'Until that time, I'll only dream Of emerald isles and you' So sweet!

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Alec Latha 09 September 2013

yeah girl nice one reach that face

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Shahzia Batool 07 September 2013

it can be read on the tapped beat...beautiful rhythm! ! !

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Cassandra Jasmine 05 September 2013

Beautiful poem! Light and airy, yet descriptive. Bravo!

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Jodie Hardy 05 September 2013

Beautiful, Lovely flowing and light poem, I hope you find the person of your dreams xx

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Gajanan Mishra 05 September 2013

emptyness I like, I know emptyness means fullness, thanks. good write. I invite you to read my poems and comment and vote if you pleased.

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