Empty Heart Comments

The words chosen so well to me understand what empty heart feels like...when lovely title talk serious content, it did make my empty heart happened hahahahaha i mean i got the meaning you tried to show...nice shot! _Soul

so it gets tricky! ! where is my Michaelis! !

Ok. I totally don't get it......but I appreciate what the offer is. Show your heart and keep writing....you have lovely words to offer, I would love to understand them though: -)

Woah man like evryone else says dis is too grandiose n grandiloquent vocab, too advanced for me. Yet kudos n bravo coz i admire highsounding word usage even if i dont get their exact intent in others poems.

Woah like evryone else says dis is too grandiloquent n grandiose english too advanced for me. So bravo n kudos i admire high sounding verbiage even if i got it only half. Thanx 4 yor coment.

No idea what this is about, too many impossible words. Simple emotive words are required to captivate a reader.

You are pelting the reader with a volley of words harder than stones! ! A dictionary is not by my side for the time being to comprehend the full meaning! But I am sure, this is some great stuff! All Best Wishes, Tunji!

hahahahahaha it is a challenge for your reader. Good exercise for the speech organs. You have made your reader like eating extremely hot potatoes. But reading this was a pleasure. I would agree with Shihabudheen K J, Difficult to digest

really superb, but as same as other comments I have problem with your words....keep simply next time.....keep on writing.... »so close«

I'm sure this is a great piece but i do believe you need to consider other readers when writing, simplify your words a little as I struggled to read or understand this piece but good work

Tunji, you obviously make use of a vocabularly far larger than that of most of your readers - including me. It would help if you would consider us and put your ideas in plainer language and so make your work easier for us to appreciate. Keep up the good work.

Wow! I thought that poem was awesome! Thanks for sharing this poem with me. :)

Good one! though this is like a paragraph style, I appreciate this.

Difficult to digest friend

It sound beautiful and deep but understanding some of the difficult words require much efforts from a reader like me. It does'nt hurt to go simple in language. It is something one can read from Khalil Gibran, that deep thoughts are still able to be expressed by the use of simple terms or language. But thanks for this poem which is such a challenge to learn more the English language.

I have to be honest and say i didn't understand this poem, and thats my loss!

I cannot understand this, pls. Come to plain language.

I have found it quite hard to understand because of scientific terms of medical science. However I liked it