Tuesday, February 28, 2006

Empty/Full Comments

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empty
‘cos you’re so far away
full
when I hear your voice every day
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Dave Birss
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Chuck Audette 28 February 2006

Wow, this is a cool poem, Dave! Seems as if your glass is at least half full! -chuck

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 28 February 2006

'empty/full' is terrific! Sometimes I have empty/empty...full/full moments...then those dry spells that need dusting. I like your poem. L

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Dave Birss

Dave Birss

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