Empty Drift Comments

Deep waters are still but sometime storms are also deep.........poem is deep

Zen, I like this one, it's very heartfelt and I can sense that feeling you are having whilst writing this. Hope the sleep managed to drift you off into another place and you're now refreshed ready to take on the day? ! ! Good write. HG: -) xx

Eek, you've got a few typos in there. :) But I like the watery imagery. I think it's cute. Um... this poem is a bit too abstract for me? I kind of see how the person is drowning, but that's about it. Or maybe I'm slow. :)