Empty Dreams Comments

Vividness and simple diction render your piece so pictorial.

again a great write a nice poetic talent from bengal

If I were a waterfall I would have fallen in love With your heart of stone Being unable to erode the hard stone, creator is ever enemy.

you must have written on me,7 colours of poetry. wow, beautuful.

if i were a water drop and a waterfall- falling down on stones. if i were a rainbow, colours and intense desire if i were a wind chime... at the end of the day we are still sleeping with empty dreams. all wishes, unfilled or fulfilled.. that is life i thought after reading your poem. very expressive of your inner thoughts and desires.

If I were a waterfall I would have fallen in love With your heart of stone' And you would break me from drop to droplets Or I would have made you unstone- - - - A beautiful poem of love with some beautiful word formulation.

As life is not what it seems, At the end of each day We are still sleeping with empty dreams........Really. Nicely envisioned and beautifully depicted. An intensive poem I like most. Thanks for sharing.

A lovely flow of words, Waterfall and hard rock Drop to droplets,

When dreams are empty mind is cool and calm When mind is filled with warm desires Dream are colorful, cheerfull an dreadful

What a beautiful drop. Clever use of metaphor to express your love. Keep dropping gems.

Passionate lines wishing life to be more fulfilling with love united.Thanks for sharing

An amazing, enchanting and mesmerizing poem...............................10

Awesome poem, I liked it. Well written, Stay blessed.