Empty Creation Poem by janice etienne

Empty Creation



Look, is their something you want from me?
creating your own person to feel worthy
all i want is to be loved entirely
and to love unconditionally

you see me and created what you thought was best
now i see that it was a selfish success

what have you made of me?

an emotionless sophisticated mess
a tool used for you to impress
all the things you wanted
i became it

i am everything i hated
i am everything you created

what have you done to me?

you watched me fall apart like water
now it's impossible to put myself back together

you diminished all i was naturally
while living under your domination

now all that i am is an empty creation

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