Friday, December 2, 2011

Empty Breaths Comments

Rating: 5.0

The masklike facade
I triumphantly rouse,
No mask, nor makeup, could hide this bruise,
blue tinted violet,
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Crimson Love
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Jacqui Broad 04 December 2011

Your lungs are your brain's co-pilot. When your mind's tired of living, they take over. An unwilling reaction. Please keep on breathing!

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Harindhar Reddy 03 December 2011

Hey one the youngest poets of the this website and one the biggest poets of this site with more than 300 poems to her name, crimson is no milk bub! She is star poetess who can inspire poets like who just has written only 100................... 'never wanting to release, yet suffoction so willing, burns the most.' ' I like the above finishing touch in the poem which makes this poem to stand out... It's my honor to read your poem dearest poet.....10++++ is not enough..... yet another terrific poem by your Crimson Love!

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