Monday, November 3, 2008

Empty Becouse Of Her Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I open my eyes and I cry,
Im all alone in my quit room,
My words are a whisper from the past,
My arms are empty because of her,
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gary hicinbothem
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Sebastine Humaemo 12 December 2008

great write gary.....can feel your love in the lines...thanks for sharing..............

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Brianna Trombley 03 December 2008

But 1 thing is that it’s hard loving a memory, Loving a memory is allot easier than hating a memory, i love these lines, so true, love the memories of the ones you lost, it makes it easier to cope with the pain

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Anita Blake 27 November 2008

i agree with Amy, great write

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<font color =fusha>Amy 24 November 2008

even though it was a sad message the emotion put into it, really achieved a great poem nice :)

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Annie Girl 24 November 2008

nice choice of words

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Chuck Petz 11 November 2008

A lot of feeling in this one. I guess that's art.

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Fiona Davidson 04 November 2008

wow Gary...so much pain in this one...well written...thanks for sharing....

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