Saturday, June 16, 2018

Empty Arms Comments

Rating: 5.0

Empty arms that ache
'Cause you're not here with me
How much can I take
Of this sheer misery?
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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 July 2018

Hurry back, and soon Please take away the pain Eager arms will hold And love you once again.....so touching and impressive. Beautiful poem on love and departure nicely executed.10

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Thanks again, Kumar, as always, for your generous assessment of my poetry! :)

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Louis Rams 20 July 2018

once I come back I'll hold you in my arms and from that moment we will never part

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I wouldn't object at all to being super-glued together, forever, with the right man! Thank you, Louis, for your sweet & tender comment! :)

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Aqua Flower 28 June 2018

I can relate to that type of emptiness felt right from the heart. When you love someone, you want to be near them all the time. When you close your eyes you can see them in your mind but when you open your eyes, you can only see the emptiness of him not being there. I hope your man returns in your arms soon!

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Me, too! Thank you, Aqua. :)

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