Saturday, March 11, 2006

Empty Apartment Comments

Rating: 4.5

My heart is an empty apartment.
The rooms chill with silence,
Suffocating my hopes of ever
Finding someone who wants to rent.
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Sydney Daniels
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lin haungs 09 May 2006

Excellent, well written, and an interesting way of defining love.. I like the way you write!

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David Darbyshire 12 March 2006

UUUUWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW nice house Syd. real good read, great idea, good words, have fun Love dave xxx

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Charles Chaim Wax 11 March 2006

what a love story the image continued until finally a smile of joy the heart dwelling at last in the castle of happiness all told with words which flow one into the other no spaces left two beings now on a single journey a fine poem

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Sydney Daniels

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