Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Empty And Filled Comments

Rating: 4.0

Is this the place to find time
To write empty words
In a room full of shine
Could I have lacked words
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Didier Sixte Kahungu
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Gloria Wekesa 14 October 2008

wow! great poem loved it. congrats!

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Samantha Ashley 10 October 2008

This is very intense. Lot's of emotion expressed in well written words :)

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Sathyanarayana M V S 10 October 2008

This sounds like an eloquent emotional outburst.............try something simple and succinct

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Empress Ina Spirit Mavuso 08 October 2008

BIG UP! ! ! ! see now this I love and feel. Remember when I said your poetry confuses me. Poetry should be a healing element so one should should feel it understand the moment they start reading, hear I sense that you are pouring out your heart yet refusing to be a victim. You talking about lost love ain't you. tell me if Im wrong. BIG UP! ! ! !

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Grace Grace 08 October 2008

what a poem u are a man with many talents Taye Diggs

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