Monday, September 29, 2008

Empty And Broken Hearted* Comments

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You'll always be in my heart
From now to eternity
My thoughts will be on you
Ever since I left I felt empty
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Mrs. Cynosure
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Darshan Patel 16 December 2008

awesome! ! ! its so touching n u knw what? ? for a moment i lost in my love days.. plz write more on this subjects..

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Silence Dogood 12 November 2008

I love alot of your lines and the emotion in this poem is well displayed I also love when you compare how you feel to other things like the subway and the rollercoaster

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Heather Hill 07 November 2008

I loved it...I can relate so much....good job! Never quit writing!

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Reshma Ramesh 05 November 2008

broken heart....great poem.....

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Melanie Williams 29 September 2008

this broght tears to my eyes. i know exactly the feeling of this poem. Its so close to me........ thank you

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