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‘…Truth is my love and it is the lie too // Truth is my being and my being itself is lie…’ Excellent composition in ‘push-pull’ …’light-shade’ style…multiple culminations… Ms. Nivedita UK

Sartre published a philosophical work in 1943, his most important philosophical treatise: ''Being and Nothingness'' ''We mean that man first of all exists, encounters himself, surges up in the world-and defines himself afterwards. If man as the existentialist sees him is not definable, it is because to begin with he is nothing. He will not be anything until later, and then he will be what he makes of himself'' Love nevertheless remains a profound existential problem and a solution. Wonderful philosophical poem, lovely to read................10++++++++

An empty world which made a mark to your poem...touching poignant piece...well done! ! ! 10

Emptiness of mind is filled by wind of divinity......a good write....

The essence of the poem is that emptiness is the end all. Good poem, Kranthi,10/10. Best Wishes Naseer

an empty feeling of emptiness....but with a memory to ponder....lay the everlasting moment to stay....i really love it...and will be put to my poem bank....Thank you my friend....God bless....a 10 +++

a poem that is packed with values.nice to read voted10 surya

Lost feeling being empty.

As always I love the originality in your poem.. your works are written from heart.. This again is a very moving write.. Loved your lines.. And I can kinda understand you too.. nice 10++ regards and best wishes Shan

A phase which gives one time to reflect and then build himself to face the uncertain future. Written with great feelings...........

Kranthi this poem of yours made me feel depressed. Which means the feelings in u r poem were well bought out. good write.

Yeah I rather this poem It shows more emotions I can totally relate to it 10s

Sometime feelings of such emptiness in life do occur, when the dear and near ones are far away or left once for all. The poem is well composed.

as i had said in one of my poems the present becomes your past, it is something that does not last. good write sam! a ten

thoughtu poem..........fine wording! 10+

living the moment is what life is all about...do it friend