Every night the moon shines,
But the nest was silent and sad.
Through your tears breaks a blinding light,
Birthing a dawn to this endless night.
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Night ensures emptiness to few & they crawl on the paper with crying pen. Absolute poetry.10++++
beautufull dear sweet poet.. give us more, you still have a lot.. thank you.. hazem
'An open embrace upon a bleeding tree' - well said. I enjoyed this poem.
heartfelt..! touchy....! fine imagery.....! A+ and 10+++++++
Why all eyes are teary, why all heart are empty, Why on this earth all sings painful ditty. Good work. Hit 10
vivid imagery..creative verses..a great poem...thumbs-up 10 Ency Bearis
Your imagery is splendid. You weave such wonderful visuals; it is almost impossible for others to emulate. you are my discovery; 10
cooollll...! ! ! i like it...! ! ! so deep and touch...! ! ! i like the word 'no motion of life' its kinnda strange but strong...
the blankness of the night will soon fade away and smiling sun will put his rays on you...10 from me