Friday, November 7, 2008

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Rating: 4.8

Every night the moon shines,
But the nest was silent and sad.
Through your tears breaks a blinding light,
Birthing a dawn to this endless night.
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C T Heart 05 January 2009

the blankness of the night will soon fade away and smiling sun will put his rays on you...10 from me

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Moushumi moushumi 29 December 2008

Night ensures emptiness to few & they crawl on the paper with crying pen. Absolute poetry.10++++

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Tom Balch 14 December 2008

Well written and crafted, nice work. regards Tom 10

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Hazem Al Jaber 13 November 2008

beautufull dear sweet poet.. give us more, you still have a lot.. thank you.. hazem

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Reshma Ramesh 10 November 2008

neat......... well penned

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Ridge Cahill 10 November 2008

'An open embrace upon a bleeding tree' - well said. I enjoyed this poem.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 November 2008

heartfelt..! touchy....! fine imagery.....! A+ and 10+++++++

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 09 November 2008

Why all eyes are teary, why all heart are empty, Why on this earth all sings painful ditty. Good work. Hit 10

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Ency Bearis 09 November 2008

vivid imagery..creative verses..a great poem...thumbs-up 10 Ency Bearis

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Sathyanarayana M V S 09 November 2008

Your imagery is splendid. You weave such wonderful visuals; it is almost impossible for others to emulate. you are my discovery; 10

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Naru Kaede 07 November 2008

cooollll...! ! ! i like it...! ! ! so deep and touch...! ! ! i like the word 'no motion of life' its kinnda strange but strong...

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