Saturday, August 10, 2019

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Rating: 5.0

You say am your queen
Then why this heart you steal
You make me empty
With your love you tempt me
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Rini Shibu
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M Asim Nehal 26 January 2021

No smooth entry and exits in love. One should learn balancing the life between love and pain. Thought provoking poem.5***

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 February 2020

Love and pain! ! Very common on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aqua Flower 10 September 2019

Love that comes and goes always leaves one empty. A heartfelt poem.

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Susan Williams 24 August 2019

Sounds like love came for a visit. Well done- the sorrow is not over-dramatized but is effectively communicated to your reader. Excellent write

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Lamar Cole 10 August 2019

This is a very good heartfelt poem with a sadful tone.

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