Monday, May 27, 2019

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Small, empty clouds
reflect in hollow windows
of the square white house,
worn as smooth as those same clouds.
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Jenny Kalahar
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Grace Diane Jessen 10 May 2020

Jenny, this is a poignant poem and you share your feelings and the mysteries so well. It reminds me a little of Walter de la Lare's poem about the traveler. Good work!

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Jenny Kalahar 11 May 2020

Thank you! I can still see this house though it's been decades. Some places stay with you forever. - Jenny

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Jenny Kalahar

Jenny Kalahar

Washington, USA
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