Wednesday, December 31, 2014

Empty Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nothing. Just a clear sky on a dulling day. A deserted street with waving flags on painted posts. The regimentation of complete uniformity. The lack of empathy in silent sorrow.

I march to where they are buried in a dark graveyard of black nodding heads, painted with wide staring eyes, and grimacing teeth. I have taken a backward step to move me forward on a sinking bog, squelching, climbing to who knows where.
...
Read full text

James Fitzpatrick
COMMENTS
Akhtar Jawad 06 January 2015

They had reached the point of where they could go no further, so I must work back to meet them, or wait here for nothing to arrive. A beautiful poem and a thoughtful note explaining the poem that helped in understanding it................10

0 0 Reply
Lyn Paul 03 January 2015

Heartfelt words. Can only imagine the feeling, Thank You too for your notes.

2 0 Reply
Hunadi Maleka 02 January 2015

Well written piece.

1 0 Reply
Close
Error Success