Wednesday, August 14, 2013

Empty Comments

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The idea of perfect love is a misconception
They fool you with movies that have happy endings and upbeat songs.
They tell you that love is beautiful, gentle, and kind
but they don't tell you that love may not last
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Lauren C
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Khairul Ahsan 15 August 2013

My God! 'Empty' is so much filled with heavy emotion! It's indeed a good poem, written from the feelings of the broken heart. But not all things you said are always true. Just bear with the time, I hope you will soon see happy tidings too.

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Dave Walker 14 August 2013

An emotion packed poem, a great write.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 14 August 2013

yeah, love is not as beautiful as in movies or romance novels but love teach us much things about the struggle, sacrifice, honesty also hope there will always be a speck of ember even in the darkest place, and that ember is love

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