Wednesday, June 26, 2013

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Coffee sits cold on the kitchen counter.
I turn the pages of the paper,
Reading just the headlines.
The house is quiet,
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Charles Darnell
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Bri Edwards 05 December 2016

WOW! 'widowed' or divorced or abandoned? wife, sweetheart, pet? ? ? ? ? well, maybe dogs and cats don't do French dinners? a simple and encompassing title! this would cause some readers [mostly women i bet] to shed tears! do i have permission to place in December's showcase? pretty please? ? ? with sugar on it? in case this is a truth about your existence, you have my condolences. bri ;) a great poem. to MyPoemList, which does NOT count as publishing! does it?

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Wahab Abdul 07 July 2013

a very lovely poem the heart of the poem i find or you may say the tuning point ''Then a sudden thought of you Catches me unaware And before I know, The sweeping is done, And you are still before me. Your smile and crinkling eyes Float just out of reach.'' ...............enjoyed the poem

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Charles Darnell

Charles Darnell

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