Wednesday, March 27, 2013

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EMPTINESS

Emptiness is the feeling of no one is in your life
Empitness shows more hidden than life
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Lebone Tshepe
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Christopher Veremu 27 March 2013

Interesting imagery...quite rich but could do with a little more polish.

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Gajanan Mishra 27 March 2013

emptiness can mean a lot of things. good. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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