Wednesday, April 27, 2005

Emptiness Comments

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The blood that falls from my heart is not pain
Though it's the tears from my eyes
For red is not showing but it's the emptiness from my soul
For I would die then live but live to die
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Ashley Olson
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Kris F 03 October 2005

I feel the same way..I mean In the same snse I feel that same way... but youare are right I wouldnt fit in 'your shoes' you wouldnd fit in mine that is how life is but I really like it...You are really good at writting potery keep it up I look forward to reading many more to come...

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Sesilia Searles 24 May 2005

hey, i really liked your poem! i write a lot of poems when im upset of even when i feel anything. it just helps me out when ever i need to get somthing off my mind. its better than doing things that may hurt me or the people around me! and i still gets my point out

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