Friday, December 16, 2011

Emptiness Within Comments

Rating: 4.8

There’s a pain that I am feeling
That leaves inside the hole
An emptiness, never again replaced
It took away my lonely soul
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Tori chanthawoharn
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Undine Roxie 16 December 2011

That's exactly how I feel! I like it when I find myself in poems...very good poem! 10 <3

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Tork Souad Diana 16 December 2011

It is a poem that reflects a lot of bitterness but yet it is so beautiful. Well done=> 10

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