Saturday, November 7, 2009

Emptiness Of Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

I know you see me sitting here
As i try to wipe away the tears
That you made fall down
I don't know what else I can do
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Alandra Nicole Moreira
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Romeo Della Valle 07 November 2009

Wow, Alandra, you really got it, you definitely got my vote, good write, if you got the time, please read my poem titled 'THE TASTE OF EMPTINESS' your comment and rating will kindly appreciate it, Love and Peace, Romeo

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Clesec Swahn 07 November 2009

Wow, the ending is what sealed the deal. I give it a perfect 10. If you have the time please comment on my poems I would value your oppinion you are a good writer.

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