Monday, July 10, 2017

Emptiness In Full Bloom Comments

Rating: 4.8

You have everything
Yet lacking something
Full of happiness
Still heart is aching
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Rini Shibu
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Dev Anand 22 July 2017

But you wear a plastic smile Still there is emptiness In the silence you hear the voice of your soul Do you feel what I feel now Yes i feel your emptiness. This emptiness you describe is very true.. thank you dev.

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Rini Shibu 22 July 2017

Thanks Dev for your comments

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 July 2017

A beautiful poem having psychologically sound. One can't feel emptiness unless concentration of mind. Well done dear Rini, thank u for posting this jem....10

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Rini Shibu 22 July 2017

Thanks a lot Mr. Kumar

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M Sagnik Das 16 July 2017

lovely poem mam...i luv it! ! ! my situation...

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Rini Shibu 22 July 2017

Thank you Sagnik..

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? plastic smile an apt meanings encoded line,

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Rini Shibu 22 July 2017

Thank for your comments

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Lamar Cole 11 July 2017

Very heartfelt and emotional poem.

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Rini Shibu 22 July 2017

Thank you so much Lam

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 July 2017

Great poetic atmosphere, Rini. Thanks

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Rini Shibu 10 July 2017

Thanks a lot for reading Jazib Rini

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Unnikrishnan E S 10 July 2017

Hi Rini, A very poignant poem. One may very often feel the cacophony of silence reverberating around oneself. There are be occasions when one is able to talk to oneself when alone, listening to the silence. Feeling extreme loneliness in a crowd. Very profound theme expressed in equally good poetry.. A 100+++, and onto mypoemlist..

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Rini Shibu 10 July 2017

Thanks Unni.. Your comments means a lot

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Petra Dexter 10 July 2017

Emptiness and loneliness are similar feelings.

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Rini Shibu 10 July 2017

Thanks for your comments Petra

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