Sunday, June 12, 2011

Emptiness Comments

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Limp as a fish lying on shingle
having fought to exhaustion
to try to stay in the salty sea.
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Vanessa Hughes 23 June 2011

Very thought provoking, are there totally selfless people who for years put others before themselves continually? I'd like to know more about this person, really enjoyed the poem. Thank you x

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