Sunday, May 18, 2008

Emptiness Comments

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My soul is rain, my heart is sad,

I need the love I’ve never had.
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Cory Calder
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Astrid Eckstein 13 May 2009

Dear Cory, Superb! Having just ended a bad relationship with a man, these words in your poem provoke feelings I'm trying to block out-which is impossible. Time heals. I'm inpatient. Grand work! Best, Amy

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Evaughn Gray 23 May 2008

wow! i'm speechless..your marvelous, 'I need her lips to touch my own' was just beautiful i loved it! 10! ~Hazel

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