Friday, October 19, 2007

Emptiness Comments

Rating: 4.0

You touch me and taste pain,
a salt lake
beached and betrayed
by its beginning.
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Val Morehouse
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Patti Masterman 07 July 2009

I love the guilty, shrinking footprints. You take the habitual acts of nature and turn them into the proof of a poems existence, and this is exquisite poetry.

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