Monday, November 19, 2018

Emptiness Comments

Rating: 5.0

My mind is not
in sync with my heart
they are not in tune
there's no melody
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Nudershada Cabanes
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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 July 2022

A great poem in its absolutely brevity dear friend. Your poetry will live forever in your readers ' heart. You have left footprints on sands of modern poetry.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 November 2018

WOW, Nuder, YOU are back with this heart wrenching poem but so beautifully worded. Really a poem full of brilliance in all its silence. I was missing YOU, dear Nudershada. Though very sad poem, but this is daschinating, that means Fascinating AND Dashing. Thank you for sharing. A 10 Full Vote. G.B.U. in Abundance. Amen.

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Kostas Lagos 20 November 2018

Dealing with oneself.Most difficult thing in the world...Great poem, welcome back!

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 November 2018

nice poetic expression in silent moments

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 November 2018

Nuder, such a well expressed poem.......10+++++++++ We miss you...............

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Nudershada Cabanes 20 November 2018

Thank you Bernard. Glad to read your comment here.

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 November 2018

Very impressive write, Nndershada. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Nudershada Cabanes

Nudershada Cabanes

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