Monday, September 22, 2014

Emptiness Comments

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It's a dark night
I can feel the coldness
I can feel the darkness
I can feel the loneliness
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 September 2014

Beautiful..Glory to be The Lord Almighty for such a beautiful thought but in last stanza you have put negative concluding make it positive , never give up hope...birds are never sad, sad they are dead

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Advija Hrustic 27 January 2017

Thank you. I just read this after couple of years, oh what a sad feeling, but I made it, still alive. Thank you.

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