It all begins with a thought
And enters into you
Like a gust of wind
And you feel empty
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The feeling of non-being and emptiness expressed so well, you've dealt with a complicated theme,
While reading khalil Gibran's philosophy I remembered 'Between day and Night ' body and the soul body keep on growing and than decaying but the soul that rules the mind and thought always feel emptiness this indicates the desire of thought of emptiness always tend to acquire the knowledge and the poem here nice one philosophical thank 10
this writing is full of meaning. A soul must be nourished to be made whole. The world cannot provide that. Lovely expressions from the poet.
Material things can never fill your emptiness, no matter how many you accumulate. Your soul can fill you to overflowing with it's delicate search through desires and feelings. Writing from your soul you can never be empty. Great write. Thank you for sharing. Thank you for your comment on my poem: Interior Sadness, I appreciate your input very much. RoseAnn