Saturday, August 24, 2013

Emptiness Comments

Rating: 4.8

You are there, when my eyes are closed,
You exist in each of my heart beat
You are the only meaning of my life,
For you I'm ready to smile even on my defeat.
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Trisha Sengupta
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Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2014

Feelings of void well expressed. When love becomes a one way traffic, such feelings overwhelm the yearning mind of the seeking, searching soul. I have a similar poem titled 'Life, A Void Circle'. You may like to read it and say a few words.

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Utsav Patel 01 September 2013

Let it go is the best way to welcome something better and new...

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Zero Empty 28 August 2013

nice imagery in this read

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Dr.subhendu Kar 27 August 2013

For you I'm ready to smile even on my defeat.................. heart rejoices by symphony onshore yet quest ruffles being bereft of sheen, quite passionate write,10+, keep on writing with more metaphors and imagery

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Marcus Mckinley 27 August 2013

you have captured the emotion of emptiness very well. nicely done

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Litan Dey 24 August 2013

For you I'm ready to smile even on my defeat.....Good said.Gd n8

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I loved this Emptiness...just as i expected it to be. Beautiful.

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Trisha Sengupta

Trisha Sengupta

Kolkata, India
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