Saturday, September 1, 2012

Emptiness Comments

Rating: 4.8

So many lies
But I believed them all
I wanted to run
But I stayed
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Joanna Pavlides
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Dr Antony Theodore 23 December 2015

The numbness The chill Hardness of the heart I can only feel... Time heals everything.. sad memories of lack of trust and betrayal remains. but we can overcome. very well described. thank you.tony

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Chinedu Dike 06 August 2015

Lovely poem depicting disappointment and heartbreak occasioned by an enforced end of bliss of love. Vain glorification of beauty insightfully portrayed in the piece. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Seale 02 September 2012

The emptiness you feel, caused by one who deserted love, is only a brief moment in time; though, seems an eternity. Your words will open your heart to the fullness it hungers for, for the love that it craves... in time. Amazing Write Joanna! So heartfelt and raw. LOved it! ! ; -) -Kelly.

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