Ashton Weibel

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Wednesday, January 27, 2010

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Darkness lurking at my soul
following breath by breath
Majestic queen I've seen so foul
exchanging secrets for my death
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Ashton Weibel

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Hunter Dasten 27 January 2010

Keep writing, your true voice will develop. This is a poem full of angst, yet it would be aided by revision. I hope you continue to write, and do so incessantly. It is the only way any of us find our place and pace within the literary world.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 January 2010

quite sad huh? ..... anyway, nice write!

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